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If there were one thing that I would keep if I had to give away everything I own, it would be my books. I would keep my books because they help me disappear into another world. I love to read and forget about all my problems for awhile. I like to curl up with a blanket then I like to turn on some music and I like to read for hours, but if I cant have all the other stuff at least I would like to have some books to read.

Roots

man-hand
manual, manicure, manufacture

ped-foot
pedicure, pedestrian, pedal

psych-mind
psychological, psycho, psychologist



I was psycho in my mind to get a manicure and a pedicure that was lime green color.

Anger Situation

When I get angry at my love one, my family, and my friends I just want to aloof from everyone I want to think of what I did wrong and I don't want to because any problems with anyone. The main things I fight about with my friends are men and family issues. Me an my friends are tight together but there are things that friends fight about. I love my friends dearly but when we fight we raise our voices at each other to see who is louder and that we can hear each other more clearly, but after all we are still est friends and don't have much issues as we did before. My family gosh where do I start. I love them, cherish them, but there are our ups and downs that we have together as a family. We are an open family we speak what is on our minds to each other. You know people always come to m and say that "I hate my family I with that they could just rote in hell." I mention to my friends think about the other people that don't have families wish that they could be with them everyday of their lives. But then they attend to yell at me and say "shut up I am hear not to talk about other people I'm talking about ME." Dam sometimes I just wish I didn't have friends or people that would judge me, look a me funny, and clown on me.

How could I address this situation by be calmer more, talk about things that are going on in my life, and express myself to others and tell them how I really feel about them.

Sentence Correcting

1. Cole shuddered then had another spasm and he got the chills as Rosy shoved Edwin lightly.
2. Cole drank the water that was in a glass,as she held the glass to his lips and he struggled to swallow the pills.
3. Cole closed his eyes as Rosy cleaned and bandaged his open wounds.

Sentence Combining

1. Cole struggled to shift his position so the ground was uneven and stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement.
2. Cole grimaced and struggled to raise his right knee and he couldn't.
3. All Cole's life he had been haunted when the nightmares were helplessness.

Cirlce Justice Sprit Bear book

Cole brutally beat up this kid at his high school named Peter. Why did Cole do this, because Peter snitched on Cole for breaking in a hardware store and vandalizing it. Cole's punishment was to go to this Circle Justice class for troubled kids that can help you sort out your problems and talk about them. He had to bring his parents and Peter had to bring his mother. Cole doesn't like his mother or father because behind closed doors Cole gets abused by his father and his mother doesn't do anything. Our group has a feeling that she gets beat by Cole's father so she backs off and says "honey what are you doing?" His father looks at the mother and says "stay out of this" and she walks away. His father is an alcoholic and can't control his drinking. I really think it was a great idea to send Cole to a stranded island all by himself, instead of Juvinial Detention. Cole would beat up other kids because he doesn't let anyone boss him around and tell him what to do. I think that it was a stupid idea for Cole to trying to get away from the island. He doesn't live in Alaska, he lives in Minnesota and that's a lot of swimming if he trying to get away.

Sentence Correcting

1. His daughter asked a question, and it was a difficult moment.
2.The fog was thick, so it was hard to see.
3. He felt sick as he got ready to throw the gernade.
4. He threw the gernade, and it made a sound.
5. Kiowa gave him some advice, and it didn't help.
6. He gets upset when he thinks about the war.

Winter Break

Alright on Winter Break I didn't do much. There were a lot of birthdays in the three weeks. On Christmas we don't do much, but last year we went over board on Christmas presents. This year my parents didn't work much to get hours because the economy is low. Me, my two sisters, and my brother got all one hundred dollars that my parents tucked away for us kids so we can at least celebrate Christmas some how. The day after Christmas, my Family and my friend went shopping at the malls. I spent my money on shoes and clothes that's the number one thing I like when I get money.

I had some friends come over like Tiffany (my friend for 3 years) and Julia (my friend since last summer) she lives close to me so she always walk over to my house and surprises me unexpectedly, and my boyfriend came over to my house (he was close by) and said hello and got me a Christmas present like a diamond necklace and a shirt from Zumiez. Those are the three main people that I saw over the Christmas break and I was hoping that would happen. I don't usually chill with a lot of people I might heard about people and bump into them if I am in the same room, but the three people that I named off I like to chill with the most.