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If there were one thing that I would keep if I had to give away everything I own, it would be my books. I would keep my books because they help me disappear into another world. I love to read and forget about all my problems for awhile. I like to curl up with a blanket then I like to turn on some music and I like to read for hours, but if I cant have all the other stuff at least I would like to have some books to read.

Roots

man-hand
manual, manicure, manufacture

ped-foot
pedicure, pedestrian, pedal

psych-mind
psychological, psycho, psychologist



I was psycho in my mind to get a manicure and a pedicure that was lime green color.

Anger Situation

When I get angry at my love one, my family, and my friends I just want to aloof from everyone I want to think of what I did wrong and I don't want to because any problems with anyone. The main things I fight about with my friends are men and family issues. Me an my friends are tight together but there are things that friends fight about. I love my friends dearly but when we fight we raise our voices at each other to see who is louder and that we can hear each other more clearly, but after all we are still est friends and don't have much issues as we did before. My family gosh where do I start. I love them, cherish them, but there are our ups and downs that we have together as a family. We are an open family we speak what is on our minds to each other. You know people always come to m and say that "I hate my family I with that they could just rote in hell." I mention to my friends think about the other people that don't have families wish that they could be with them everyday of their lives. But then they attend to yell at me and say "shut up I am hear not to talk about other people I'm talking about ME." Dam sometimes I just wish I didn't have friends or people that would judge me, look a me funny, and clown on me.

How could I address this situation by be calmer more, talk about things that are going on in my life, and express myself to others and tell them how I really feel about them.

Sentence Correcting

1. Cole shuddered then had another spasm and he got the chills as Rosy shoved Edwin lightly.
2. Cole drank the water that was in a glass,as she held the glass to his lips and he struggled to swallow the pills.
3. Cole closed his eyes as Rosy cleaned and bandaged his open wounds.

Sentence Combining

1. Cole struggled to shift his position so the ground was uneven and stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement.
2. Cole grimaced and struggled to raise his right knee and he couldn't.
3. All Cole's life he had been haunted when the nightmares were helplessness.

Cirlce Justice Sprit Bear book

Cole brutally beat up this kid at his high school named Peter. Why did Cole do this, because Peter snitched on Cole for breaking in a hardware store and vandalizing it. Cole's punishment was to go to this Circle Justice class for troubled kids that can help you sort out your problems and talk about them. He had to bring his parents and Peter had to bring his mother. Cole doesn't like his mother or father because behind closed doors Cole gets abused by his father and his mother doesn't do anything. Our group has a feeling that she gets beat by Cole's father so she backs off and says "honey what are you doing?" His father looks at the mother and says "stay out of this" and she walks away. His father is an alcoholic and can't control his drinking. I really think it was a great idea to send Cole to a stranded island all by himself, instead of Juvinial Detention. Cole would beat up other kids because he doesn't let anyone boss him around and tell him what to do. I think that it was a stupid idea for Cole to trying to get away from the island. He doesn't live in Alaska, he lives in Minnesota and that's a lot of swimming if he trying to get away.

Sentence Correcting

1. His daughter asked a question, and it was a difficult moment.
2.The fog was thick, so it was hard to see.
3. He felt sick as he got ready to throw the gernade.
4. He threw the gernade, and it made a sound.
5. Kiowa gave him some advice, and it didn't help.
6. He gets upset when he thinks about the war.

Winter Break

Alright on Winter Break I didn't do much. There were a lot of birthdays in the three weeks. On Christmas we don't do much, but last year we went over board on Christmas presents. This year my parents didn't work much to get hours because the economy is low. Me, my two sisters, and my brother got all one hundred dollars that my parents tucked away for us kids so we can at least celebrate Christmas some how. The day after Christmas, my Family and my friend went shopping at the malls. I spent my money on shoes and clothes that's the number one thing I like when I get money.

I had some friends come over like Tiffany (my friend for 3 years) and Julia (my friend since last summer) she lives close to me so she always walk over to my house and surprises me unexpectedly, and my boyfriend came over to my house (he was close by) and said hello and got me a Christmas present like a diamond necklace and a shirt from Zumiez. Those are the three main people that I saw over the Christmas break and I was hoping that would happen. I don't usually chill with a lot of people I might heard about people and bump into them if I am in the same room, but the three people that I named off I like to chill with the most.

Sentence Correcting

I went skating down at the pond. Three kids from my school were there. We fell down again and again. We laughed so much our stomachs hurt.

I thought the lopsided game would never end. The score just kept getting worse and worse.

Martha thinks she is so cool, but she is not cool to me.

Joe watched a video. That his mom bought it for him at the store where she worked at.

Susan loved to watch football and she would watch it every Sunday on T.V. Every Saturday she would go to the local college football game. She would always wear the school colors.

Information about Alaska

Wild life:
Kodiak Bear
Polar Bear
Grizzly Bear (Brown Bear)
Moose

State sport:
Dog Mushing It once was the primary form of transportation in most of Alaska. Today dog sled racing is a popular winter sport. It was adopted as the state sport in 1972.

http://www.alaskasbest.com/facts.htm

Alaska is the largest state union at 586, 412 square miles http://www.welcometoalaska.com/facts.htm

Governer: Sarah Palin, R (to Dec. 2010)

Alaska accounts for 25% of the oil produced in the United States.
Located near Prudhoe Bay, on the northern Alaskan coast, is North America's largest oil field. Every day, millions of gallons of oil are removed from Prudhoe Bay and pumped through the Trans-Alaska Pipeline. The pipeline, maintained by Alyeska Pipeline Service Company, snakes its way from Prudhoe Bay on Alaska's northern coast to the southcentral port of Valdez where the oil is pumped into tankers. One of the largest pipeline systems in the world, the Trans-Alaska Pipeline moves up to 88,000 barrels of oil per hour on its 800 mile journey to Valdez http://www.johnnyseastriverlodge.com/alaska.html


I learned in Sophmore economics that the oil tankers go up to Alaska and take oil from Alaska then bring it back down to the West coast states (Washington, Oregon, California)

Things that are happening in my life

Some stuff that is challenging in my life is:

My family

Relationships

My family is challenging right now, why? Because I got myself in trouble with my mother on Tuesday night I went to my ex boyfriends house and I was supposed to be at my place no later than dinner time (five or six.) I walked in my house at eight because I missed the bus. My mother didn't believe me that I missed it. We yell a lot when I am not responsible for what I am needing to do. Me and my mom go at a lot and we're like jail cell mates. I told her that her comeback was, "If you don't do stuff that I tell you to do then we won't fight like this everyday!" I love my mom dearly in the heart. I just hate it when we fight it's not really fun. My mom and father want me to change my life and let it be easier for me as well as them. I need to do what I am told, be mature enough and handle my responsibilities.

Fill in the blanks with So and Because

Anna went to the store because she needed milk.
Chris ate too much candy, so his stomach hurt.
Richard felt tired, so he bought an energy drink.
Tesla ran after the bus because she woke up late.

My own sentences:

• Abby was vomiting all night because she ate five pizzas.
• Me and a few of my cousins went on a jog. When we got back we were tired, so we went to the store to get some water.
• I was making dinner and my hair kept on getting in the way, so I went to go put up my hair.
• I was drinking an energy drink because I was too tired of reading.

Scary or Embarrassing Moment

When I was 16, there was a cemetery that is called Zena the Backwards Church. Me and five of my friends went there and it's a tradition on Halloween, that we go and visit to take pictures of the graves, orbs, etc. Once I went there and there was a kitchen and a church. Me and a friend went up to the kitchen, and really heard a little boy and a little girl playing with children's toys. There was a toy that got thrown out of the kitchen. My friend booked it and I did the same thing. My other friends stayed there and were doing their business. They knew that we were by the kitchen, but they couldn't find us so they walked down the hill, that you walk up to to go to Zena. We hid in the orchards. My friend and I jumped out and scared my three other friends. They screamed and it echoed all around the church area. Another time when we went up there in the orchards there was a man riding his bike, and our vehicle was parked next to the orchards . We all jumped in the car as fast as we can.

Me and my friend were getting ready to go to her house in Keizer. I like to walk around and go back and forth to my bedroom and grab stuff. She likes to follow me wherever I go and I forgot that she does that. So I headed back to the bathroom and I dropped a pair of my panties on the ground. She went to pick them up and I didn't realize it and I screamed because she was in front of me and I didn't know it. To me it was scary/funny, but she was just cracking up a storm. I hated her about ten minutes because she scared me for the second time when I was blow drying my hair in the bathroom. She walked in and scared the living crap out of me. Now I usually lock the door so that doesn't happen again.